“It’s time. Everyone’s sleeping?”
“Yes. Put this blindfold on while I change. I’m driving. No peeking”
“I see the chapel! Do you have the rings?”
The marvelous and marvelously hilarious Jayne Martin tossed out a challenge: Hint Fiction. A beginning, middle and end in just 25 words or less. Join in the fun. Give it a whirl here.
Is this an elopement? It has that sense of excitement. I can almost hear the rustling of her dress. If it’s not, then boy do I feel stupid. 😉
No feeling stupid–you’ve got it!
Yay! Good work!
Nicely done! It’s incredible how much one can pack into so few words.
Thanks for coming by, Nicky. 🙂
Cute. I loved it.
Leaves me wondering why they didn’t tell anyone. Nicely done.
Yes,I wondered the same thing until I realized that he may be a “Hatfield” and she a “McCoy.”
Sweet.. it is thrilling the amount of story that can be conveyed in 25 words. Nicely done.
Yea! I wanna peek!
Nice job.
My mind is racing. Your photo heightened my interest!
Driving and changing at the same time? Uh oh!
Nah, she changes first…she’s daring but not entirely crazy.
Everyone sleeping gives this piece a hint of intrigue. Hmm, I find myself wondering what’s going on other than just an elopement. Lovely! Gorgeous photo! Mainplace.
Loved this one! Exciting!