He was so handsome that she nearly lost her nerve, especially when his eyes pierced hers, but the dare was too enticing; after all, she did love a rousing challenge. As she approached the long, teak wood bar, she chastised herself for such childish folly.
“Excuse me,” she started in, voice sultry and tempting, raising her arms high, breasts plump and spilling out over her corset, her cheeks faintly pink with embarrassment, “but did you happen to drop this cute little teddy bear?”
The next moment took her totally by surprise, as he swooped her up, deftly ascended two flights of stairs, hastily unlocked the mahogany door, traversed the long hallway in seconds, and threw her down on the perfectly made bed only to kiss her long, hard, and deep, his passion rising with each exhale into her expectant mouth.
By now their loyal customers were used to such escapades, having frequented Phred and Mona’s Long Bar for years, continually enthralled by the oft-shocking antics of a couple with such other-worldly devotion that they easily became fools for love in each other’s presence.
Well, that was certainly different Britton. Left me quite breathless! Nicely done.
Thank you Sandra–I could just imagine them beaming into each other’s eyes, the passion still alive years later. I’m glad you enjoyed!
Hey Britt! You know, I think I need a lie down? It’s been far too long! Indigo x
It’s always a good day for a lie down, no?
Steamy Hollywood scene tenderly morphing into the repeat romp of old fools in love, I would raise a glass at Phred and Mona’s — and take notes.
Yes, I can see you there, enjoying the moment fully!
Hot! Love all the rich details. Good job, my friend. I worked on this prompt for days and still couldn’t nail it.
…and then you did it.
That sounds like my kind of place! How wonderful to have a romance like that!
I’ll definitely be on the lookout for such a lively hangout. Wouldn’t it be funny if I actually found one?
All right. You inspired me. I FINALLY finished it, but I have my doubts. This was really a tough one for me.
YAY!! – No doubts necessary, your work is always stellar, Jayne.
Britton. That left me a little breathless. It is wild what we can create in five sentences.
Yes, wild, wild, wild!
Sooo good Britton, that’s a kiss and a half!
Yes, I enjoyed imagining that kiss!!
Packed with delightful noteworthy details, the teak wood bar, that little teddy bear, perfectly made bed and the name of the place. Brava, sistah!
Aw, thank you my friend. I was imagining the place clearly as I wrote. I want to go there. I want that kiss!!
Wow! A flaming combination of passion, love, and playfulness! I love the kind of devotion in a relationship that doesn’t fade with time… a refreshing read! 🙂
I’m so glad you picked up on that–the fact that their passion had not and would not fade. I was trying to capture exactly that. Thank you for stopping by!