You will blush if I tell you what he did to me.
If I told you about the way he kissed me, his passion devouring my lips like fine chocolate, you would be okay, your face impassive, colorless.
Even if I told you about us falling into bed, hungry as wild animals deprived too long from succulent, wild kill, you would merely smile at the imagery.
But if I told you about the way he looked at me, with his eyes wide open and tender, with his heart fully on his sleeve, talking to me, loving me completely, you would blush because what came next obliterated everything rational.
It’s hard for me to tell you what he said, to actually say it without blushing myself, but you must know, I have to share this: “You feel like breathing,” he said.
This week’s word: blush
35 thoughts on “If I told you”
Wow! That was absolutely exquisite, my friend. And yes. I’m blushing. 🙂
And I thought nothing could ruffle you, Jayne!
Thank you Catherine. It got a little warm there for a few minutes…
You’re good! Lovely and sexy, too! (I mean your writing….well, you, too, I’m sure!)
Was so great to meet you up close and personal! Thanks for coming by and reading my 5.
Hey Britt! Yep, Jayne nailed it: exquisite. Indigo x
Hey Indigo–thanks. I took a pic for you yesterday. Eventually I’ll send it over. 🙂
Thank you! Look forward to it!
Wonderfully well written. Love it!
Hi April–nice to see you here–and thank you. I hope all is well…and steamy too. 🙂
This is absolute beauty!
Why thank you my dear friend!
WOW is right, had me tearing up – so beautifully written. XO
Oh my soulful, sweet one. Thank you for letting it touch you.
Delicious– perhaps there’s more to this story…xxxj
Jenne…you rogue! I’ll never tell…
Stunning and awe inspiring. Great Work!
Hello, and thank you for visiting–welcome to The Jaded Lens! I’ll stop on over and see your offering as well!
Britton- Bring this side of you out more often so Jayne and I can blush together! lovely piece. elizabeth
You and Jayne, together, blushing? Now that would be a sight!
Oh oh oh oh. Now that’s intimacy. You nailed it chickadee!
Wouldn’t it be lovely?…sigh…
All that’s missing is a winking moon peeking from behind a cloud 😉
Drat! I should have weaver her in! 🙂
Aww … that was blushing with sweetness!
It is fun to imagine this kind of passion, the high of young love set free…
The voice in this was compelling. Nicely and sensitively done.
Sandra, I struggled with the voice, which surprised me. I guess our ability to manage and express passion is more difficult than it may seem…but then “Fifty Shades of Grey,” despite the purported poor writing, has managed to capture more than a few readers. Passion…a loaded subject.
I appreciate your weekly visits!
Oh wow! This was fabulous. Lovely work with the prompt.
Thank you CC! I appreciate your visit. I have not made all my rounds yet!
Gorgeously passionate, wonderful words Britton!
I always love your visits, Lisa, and I love how “five sentence fiction” writing can unlock that which is hidden.
Delicious and oh so intense… nice one Britton!
Thank you, Michelle. It was a indeed a delicious fantasy and I’m glad you liked it!